tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4394229508004811632.post2005588781693643480..comments2024-01-22T12:12:17.447-07:00Comments on The Book Doctor: Make Your Settings CountThe Book Doctorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04630790153730670666noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4394229508004811632.post-63570900232615421782010-05-07T06:47:29.595-06:002010-05-07T06:47:29.595-06:00Thanks for all your great comments. It helps me kn...Thanks for all your great comments. It helps me know the things that help you most. Be sure to let us know if you have any questions you'd like to have addressed. I've gotten such a warm welcome, I feel right at home!<br />Blessings,<br />EdieEdie Melsonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4394229508004811632.post-23499145105709865652010-05-06T09:46:27.097-06:002010-05-06T09:46:27.097-06:00Hey, Alena, welcome to Book Doctor!Hey, Alena, welcome to Book Doctor!Darlene Franklinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12309528220394646410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4394229508004811632.post-68188802245949021992010-05-04T16:34:21.782-06:002010-05-04T16:34:21.782-06:00Great advice. I enjoyed the examples, the second o...Great advice. I enjoyed the examples, the second one really came to life. What you said about tying emotions or memories to the setting made all the difference in the second example.Carla Gadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01793809172905144101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4394229508004811632.post-62168411080943626522010-05-04T07:40:22.357-06:002010-05-04T07:40:22.357-06:00Great example. Thanks!Great example. Thanks!Victoria Dixonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14012092208934951963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4394229508004811632.post-65264760953948893022010-05-03T15:51:05.821-06:002010-05-03T15:51:05.821-06:00Wonderful example of how to show emotions through ...Wonderful example of how to show emotions through the setting. Thank you, Edie. :-)Sandi Roghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14133590559340429928noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4394229508004811632.post-59670977731146199172010-05-03T13:21:29.888-06:002010-05-03T13:21:29.888-06:00Excellent examples of good writing!Excellent examples of good writing!Emme Gannonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4394229508004811632.post-79136054099581822722010-05-03T11:38:04.123-06:002010-05-03T11:38:04.123-06:00Very good examples! I'm striving to get better...Very good examples! I'm striving to get better. My first draft of my first MG manuscript was more like the first example. I went back and added a lot more words and detail.Janethttp://creativewritingintheblackberrypatch.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4394229508004811632.post-27074809955310632352010-05-03T09:47:22.823-06:002010-05-03T09:47:22.823-06:00Good to hear from you, Edie! Good advice.Good to hear from you, Edie! Good advice.Darlene Franklinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12309528220394646410noreply@blogger.com